HW
A. Finish Revising body paragraph #1, follow these steps
1. Strategy - is it clear and powerful?
2. Cited evidence - real research, not just things you know!
3. Are you building your case? persuasive vs informational
4. Vague ==> specific!!!!
B. 2nd Body Paragraph - spend 20 min writing or typing your 2nd paragraph...be ready for edits in class tomorrow!!!

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